Journal # 11 How is my writing ?

For me, this is final week in Cal State Fullerton. In the composition class, my writing has improved because I learned some different kind of writing. For example, I started to write journals when I had free time; also, I learned some of narrative writing. The journal can keep I write in English, and I tried to use similes and metaphors to describe something or someone in the narrative essay. I believe these are very helpful in the future. However, I still have some bad habits in writing. For example, I know every paragraph needs topic sentence, controlling ideas and conclusion, but sometimes I forgot to follow these rules. I consider the reason that we have different writing rules in the Chinese culture. In the future, I should keep it in my mind.